ickplant@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 2 months agoHello therelemmy.worldimagemessage-square14linkfedilinkarrow-up1466arrow-down12
arrow-up1464arrow-down1imageHello therelemmy.worldickplant@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 2 months agomessage-square14linkfedilink
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up12arrow-down2·edit-22 months agoIt doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second verse line. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHA
minus-squareAngryCommieKender@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·2 months agoSecond line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·2 months agoI was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction
minus-squareZwiebel@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·2 months agoYou can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”
minus-squaresnf@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up6·2 months agoYeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”
It doesn’t scan. But it’s not bothering me. Nope not at all. Not in any way annoyed by the fact that there’s one too many syllables in the second
verseline. Only a complete pedant would get HUNG UP ON THAT RIGHT HAHAHAHAHASecond line. The whole thing is an excerpt of the first verse. The chorus isn’t for another couple lines.
I was actually wondering about that but was too lazy to check. Thanks for the correction
You can cope with that by dropping a syllable, like “t’fast”
Yeah, it could be rephrased a little as well, like “guess I stood up too fast again”