But no pun in ten did.

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    Are you an english speaker at home?

    This grammar is very readable to me.

    In the first sentence (title) they said they send poems for the goal of having a winner. The second sentence builds upon that.

    I dont think this format is very unusual.

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      1 month ago

      “I sent in 10 jokes in hopes of having a winner. No pun in ten did (have a winner(??)).”

      “I sent in 10 jokes in hopes of one winning. No pun in ten did (win).”

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        1 month ago

        Having looked it up, you are technicly correct.

        It does feel like a very minor imprecision though, especially in a pun community on the internet where half the people dont speak english as a first language.

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          The entire point is the wordplay though.

          “I want to be cremated as it is my last hope for a smoking hot body.”

          vs

          “I want to be cremated as it is my last hope to be sexy.”

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            1 month ago

            Now i really owe you a apology

            Because i only now realize the second layer that “no pun in ten did” was the winning pun. Right?

            Its still somewhat funny without that dept and i got caught on that.

            I dont think op knew this themselves but i very much understand your point now. I recall an experience myself where i knew a joke well and then heared half of that joke. Yeah i get it now.

            Thanks for your pantience.

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      1 month ago

      I get the joke, I knew the joke before. I am saying this is a bad telling of the joke.